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PS, the names in here are land marks at Luray Caverns



Caverns of Introspection and Solitude



The elusive muse, God--

intrinsic as the calcium crooks of Luray.

He slumbers beneath a quilt of millions,

and my incredulity waxes like a titian moon.



Stone, stone, is my mind--

Housed in a subterranean sepulcher,

she breeds my coma in Saracen’s tent,



and seeps seclusion, the sweetest water

that erodes my senses in tandem.

The stalactites of thought testify:

“this is the double-edged sword.”



Nestled in Pluto’s chasm, I wear the veil of Titania:

My face pure calcite, a myriad of lambrequins,

I remain:



preserved within the stalactite lockets,

though the limestone fetters encase more than they release:

thoughts remain flies in amber.



O old cave whose Dream Lake reflects its

own splendor yet serrated corrugations,



Your poisoned chalice seduces me still.Do you like this poem? Please comment!!?
Awesome! I'm going Spelunking!